coffee time in the garden

I am sipping a coffee on the front deck.
As the summer passes, the air is more getting cooler.
I can see the mountain landscape far away.
Gon likes taking a time in the garden.
He always observes insects, especially bees living in hive in front of our deck.

 

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I'm sipping a coffee on the deck in front of my house. 

The air is more getting cooler after midsummer.

I can see the mountain scenery in the distance. 

(The view of the mountain is visible in the distance. )

Gon likes spending time in the garden. 

He observes the bees that making hives on the azalea tree in front of my house. 

I'm a little scared these days because many bees sitting on the light bulb above the front door.

(I'm a little scared these days because there's a lot of bees sitting on the light bulb on the porch.)

a lot of bees sitting on the light bulb